Question about the Obama's Graduation Speeches

Here is the transcript of First Lady Michele Obama's speech at Bowie:

ABC9 Butchers Michelle Obama's Commencement Speech Transcript

Here is the transcript of President Obama's speech at Morehouse: 

Transcript: Obama’s Commencement Speech at Morehouse College

Here is an article discussing the speeches:  

How the Obama Administration Talks to Black America

I'm curious as to YOUR thoughts on the article.